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is this a good poem??

im not sure if you cld even consider this a poem lol but I wrote this after I had a fight with a “friend.”…anyway here it is.

who are you to judge the life I live,you have no idea what my life is like and what it’s like to be me. you never completley know someone until you step in their shoes. who do you think you are to say I got it easy. im not asking for pity but I have hardships also like you. so im just asking for understanding. all lives are alike and different. different because all of our problems are different. but the same because we all have problems. no life is easy nor perfect. they all have complications. so next time you go talking smack, may I ask you, who are you to judge the life anyone lives.

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Answer #1

wow thats really good, I like it,

Answer #2

haha thankss(:

Answer #3

I Like it=D Yerr really Good!

Answer #4

Yah I like it pretty well. If I knew exactly what happend with you two it would be better but yah I think it’s good.

Answer #5

alright well its about when my so called “Friend” started judging me and my life. when she doenst even know that much about my life. she was going through a tough time and started giving me attitude and we got in a fight. she was going on and on about how my life is easy theres never anything wrong with it. when even though I hide it well there is many problems in my life. and you cant judge me when you dont even know me. just because im strong and seem to have a smile on my face most of the time doesnt mean my lifes perfect. no bodys life is perfect. so yeaa lol. can anyone else relate to this??

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