input and criticism on my lyrics?

can you tell me what you think about these lyrics and what I could change about them to make them better!

We are the ones who get left behind We are the ones who are forgotten We are the ones who hide in fear We are the ones who won’t escape tonight

Left behind in the dirt and the mud We crawl for cover and hide in fear We won’t come out for you no more We’re all done with sadistic wh#res The fight has left our bones And we won’t put up with sh!t from you We sit back and watch the show We add our bit to the musical and watch the show

We are the ones who get left behind We are the ones who are forgotten We are the ones who hide in fear We are the ones who won’t escape tonight

We run for cover and find no comfort We are left with nothing We are left for dead and die tonight

Take this rose and close your eyes Try to remember this situation for a time Pull the trigger and say goodbye And forget the ones left behind Kiss me on the cheek and say goodbye I’ll stay beside you for a life if we decide

We are the ones who get left behind We are the ones who are forgotten We are the ones who hide in fear We are the ones who won’t escape tonight

We are the ones who stare into the sun We are the ones who stare at stars We are the ones with shattered dreams We are the ones who say goodbye this time