I wrote this song...any good?

I need to know (it still needs work)

Time goes by I never heard your name but I always felt the same every time I saw your face it was sketched in my memory for just me to see and I say

Chorus I need to know What you’ve been doing about me I want to know how did you live without me I need to know why its been so long I need to know why our love is gone

Did you love me way back then, Were we ever more than just friends Was it something special to you Did you even care—to be true End of chorus

Life it goes by oh so fast Watching the hourglass I need to know my past To make it through today

Still looking to find the truth That life I thought I had with you Its haunted me from day to day I still need to find my way

And I say

Chorus I need to know What you’ve been doing about me I want to know how did you live without me I need to know why its been so long I need to know why our love is gone

Did you love me way back then, Were we ever more than just friends Was it something special to you Did you even care—to be true

Answer #1

i love it, i think you have a talent there

Answer #2

I like it…would love to hear it set to music. :-)

Answer #3

Sounds like nice heart-felt tune lyrics…Good luck !!

Answer #4

you put memorys in there, try to use three syllable words as little as possible

Answer #5

I really like it. it’s very nice.

Answer #6

id really like to hear the music. is it happy? sad slow fast good lyrics tho

Answer #7

I really really like it a lot

Answer #8

That’s a very nice song. I recommend picking up a guitar and playing it in front of an audience!

Answer #9

what kind of song is it? like what genra do u think it would be in?

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