I wrote a song. Do you like it?

Please, tell me your honest answer. Thanks. Please comment

That girl (title)

When, I’m down.. Your always here…to pick me up, when I’m not there… Are you going to be that one in my dreams When I close my eyes, I see that you are the one for me the only one for me.. You and I.. are ment to be. Youre that girl for me that only one I need. It’s you the girl, in my dreams.. The one that see’s who I really want to be.. Thats why.. Youre that girl for me.. Are you going to be that one in my dreams. When I close my eyes, I see That you are the one for me The only one for me You and I are ment to be.. Your the girl for me. The only one I need, the one that makes me complete.The only one that beleaves in me. The one that lifts me up, when I can’t breathe. Are you going to be that one in my dreams, When I close my eyes I see that you are the one for me The only one for me! Yeah! Yeah! Cause YOU AND I ARE MENT TO BE Your the girl for me, the only one I need The one that makes me… me…

Answer #1

YOUR an amazing writter seriously I write songs as well mabe you can help me too but who knows only if you want lol but good job who ever that was for she’ll love it

Answer #2

wow you are amazing!!! Good job! SO who is this girl haha just playing

Answer #3

By what genre is this song? The lyrics are good,but the music?Have you it?

Answer #4

That is really good!!!

Answer #5

Yeah it’s great try not to use “the one” “the only and that kinda stuff so much…but yeah it’s great!! Keep writing! :)

Answer #6

wowza!! thats a great song…I wish I could hear it!! lol…:)

but keep up the good work!!! hahah

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