ok look at my pic. what could I do to look better?
Don't ever do that pose again. Simple really :) Also you have quite shiny skin or at least you appear to anyways, maybe try out some oil wipes? I don't know. I'm no good at this. You look lovely on that fair ground one by the way.
try a new haircut a bold side fringe would look good
Try out different styles of clothing.
your sweet thanks