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I just wrote this at the dead of night, tell me what you think!

Title: I don’t love you-but I do poem:I sit looking at the screen Waiting just too long Desperate that may seem But something, is still wrong

I’m thinking it over-did I do it right? Leaving you behind my shoulder, I just might

After all we went through This is what I get Was your heart true? Or have we never really met?

After all this confusion Here is my conclusion I don’t love you-but I do

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Answer #1

I like it too. I know where you are coming from. Just be careful of one thing…you might not want to post your work online. Anyone can steal it, and submit it as their own. One day you might see your own words with someone elses name underneath it, which would be horrible. Other than that, just keep working and writing, and one day soon you will have a big collection of your works. :)

Good luck!

Answer #2

I liked it :)

Answer #3

sweet poem you gave me an idea for a new song haha your good :)

Answer #4

sweet poem you gave me an idea for a new song haha your good :)

Answer #5

It’s sooo nice, best of luck don’t forget to post your other poems ;)

Answer #6

I absolutely love it :) it was terrific great job and I also no where yur coming from..It was really good

Answer #7

haha cool

Answer #8

I like it. God gave you a good talent.

Answer #9

rhyming is passe

Answer #10

Awesome

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