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I have a poem here

I dont understand

I dont understand Why theres so much hate Why we cant relate Why we discriminate

But most of all Why innocent lives are lost And at such a high cost This evil plot

What I understand most is A musicians lyric Representing human spirit So lets open our ears and hear it

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Answer #1

WOW! I really like this poem! Well done, it’s not easy writting poetry, easier when it comes from the heart…I think it’s perfect, don’t change it! It’s a good way of geting your message across to the public. :) xx

Answer #2

WOW! I really like this poem! Well done, it’s not easy writting poetry, easier when it comes from the heart…I think it’s perfect, don’t change it! It’s a good way of geting your message across to the public. :) xx

Answer #3

yeh!! It’s good!! JUst the end…it makes sense till you get to the end the last little caption thingy!!!

Answer #4

YEAH I LOVE THIS POEM.

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