How are these poems?

I had to write 2 poems for english relating to some type of lesson we shoudl learn in life.I need some feed back on them…

Poem 1: You can’t trust every person you meet Some are good and others are bad You aren’t going to be friends for life Some things are unfixable Like a broken heart from being called Self-Centered or Annoying Even hearing things from other people hurts Some things come right out of the blue And you can’t do anything but cry You sit and cry You think about the person And realize they aren’t anything but a road block Preventing you from being the person you want to be You can’t always care what other people think It’s their opinion of you And sometimes it hurts Sometimes first impressions mean a lot That’s what you remember the most You can get blinded by their talents or looks But if that’s all that’s good about them it’s not worth the frustration We all learn this lesson Sometimes you know that the person is bad but can’t let go You keep looking at their picture Or something they gave you It’s a hard lesson to learn but we all go through it in life You just have to be yourself and find the people who care

Poem2: A pencil is more than what meets the eye It is a device that allows people to Write down thoughts, Draw a master piece, Or write to that special someone. A pencil is not permanent But not totally removable either. You can erase what you have written But won’t be completely gone. You can stitch a wound back together But when healed there will still be a scar You can say sorry to someone who just lost a loved one But there will still be pain. A pencil is so much more than a tool you use in math or science But a tool you can use to learn and grow from A lesson that needs to be sought out and learned by yourself

thanx for your help! xD