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Can you guys give me some feed back on a poem i wrote ?? It's called 'Soul of a Zombie' xx

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Standing reluctantly infront of the sink, it's half ten and im washing dishers again. It's been a long day, a blur of a life, i hold in my hand a very sharp knife. Thoughts spring to mind, ones i shouldn't be having. In my right i hold the power to end life, will it be mine tonight? I can't bring myself to put it down,the want is so high. Gazing at the knife then my reflection in the window 'Who is she?' is repeated. Contemplating my fate, so many ways to do it, is this the one?, where to start... 'Oh such fun' feeling no pain, she's bleeding again. The reflection hasn't flinched not even a bit, the gash in her chest is going in by the inch. The dishers need cleaning again, some one walks in and see's me staring at the knife..still clean. My relfection has died a horrible death. I continue with my zombie like life, knowing my soul was killed that night..