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Does this look okay for a formal email to a middle school teacher?

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Mrs [name of teacher]
I am a language student at [name of my college] and was informed by [teacher's name] that you are looking for asѕistants for French lessons. I am very interested in this opportunity as I am hoping to study French and Spanish at university.
Could you please let me know when you need help?