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It was after the mid of the night when she get up tight ‘cause the phone rang and she picked it up while shouting Whatever you are to call me now you having no right

“Hey it’s me don’t be up tight I’m the person who promised to always be tight”

“Omg are you ok?” “Are you fine?” “Don’t you know the time now?” “Are you getting blind?”

‘No am alright’

So why he calling me now? She said in her mind

‘I’ve something to say but I’m scared your replay’

“Scared?! No say whatever is it it’d be okay”

‘Well I don’t know if I say’d you go? Or’d you stay? But am going to say it anyway ‘cause its time to Let you know that I’m in love with you. I know I shouldn’t do but even your my best friend you The love of my life too. So after you knew I’ve Questions for you Are we still friend or becomes Foes?’

“Well, I don’t know how it could be All these years I couldn’t see That you are in love with me More than friends we couldn’t be I’d forget everything and you’d let it be I knew you well you can handle it You’d take me as a sis and you’d get over it”

‘Well that was the answer I was expect I told you I love You and you told me all I can be just friend. Oh thx a lot For your disrespect It’s my fault ‘cause I shouldn’t dream By something doesn’t exist.

“Well I think it’d be the end I’ve nothing to do in this sh* Hope you by god be blessed And find the girl which you can get And find some other best friend”

Then she hanged up the phone And I was felling so lone But no I’m over it Just as what she said I deleted all the Memories and carried on my heart and just left