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I’m doing a long composition essay for the struggles Juliet had to face in Romeo and Juliet.

This is what I have so far…

    In literature, a character often struggles against a powerful force. These struggles usually have a significant effect on that character. For example in The Tragedy of Romeo and Juliet by William Shakespeare, the character Juliet has to face the battle of her family feuding with the family of her lover. Juliet is forced to do lie, lose people that she loves, and has to fake her own death. All of which could have been prevented if the Capulet’s, and Montague’s had not had a longtime grudge against one another.

Is there anything I could change, add or get rid of? I’m really bad at English. :/ so help would be much appreciated. Thanks<3

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Answer #1

That sounds alright to me! But change the ‘Juliet is forced to do lie.’ It should be ‘Juliet is forced to lie.’ Hope this helped!! :D x

Answer #2

you put Juliet is forced to do lie, lose people that she loves, and has to fake her own death. erase the do so it should look like this… Juliet is forced to lie, she lose’s people that she loves, and has to fake her own death.

Answer #3

imprego is almost right… ‘she lose’s’ does not make any sense… lose’s = lose is…

Answer #4

Thanks(: I realized that after, ahaha.

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