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Do you think this is a good poem?
Lying on course grains of sand running my hands through the roughness the sunlight reflecting off umbrellas …peering round what seems a deserted beach.
Feeling sweat trickling slowly down my back. Catching a few words of the excitement a wave of younger children in the salty ocean water, watching in wonderment the stricken look of loved one’s faces worried as they play.
the little boy’s sand castle is slowly washed away by waves, it is knocked down like a soldiers’ fire little at a time as if surrendering to the tides, inch by inch.
Noticing the pink salmon colored seashell resting by my feet as I look a little closer, I see a smug little creature as it makes its slow journey crawling back into the sea.
the poem is kind of dreamy sounding. I like it.
yes its a very good poem
It is an absolutely beautiful poem.
It’s like being in the poem itself
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