do you like this poem?

Its mine & hubbys 12 year wedding anniversery & he went all out & bought me everything including gorgeous flowers delivered to my door & I am flat broke this week as I dont get paid till wednesday, but I made him a card with this poem in it & im also making him nice dinner & desert,

so I just want to know if this poem is too mushy or nice! thanks all x

Twelve years have passed since together down the aisle. In love we walked with promises to last a long, long while. Learning through the years that love means many things. Virtue, love, sincerity are precious joys life brings. Every dream we have dreamed together all the plans we made. Remembering how some came through…as others…we watched fade. And timeswe shared in laughter and times we shared in tears… No doubt drew us together with the passing of the years. Now and then we reminisce of times we knelt and prayed. In looking back some times were rough, but aren’t we glad we stayed? Vows we made kept near in heart today still mean the same. Each new day brought challenges-we took them as they came. Reminiscing back through years Somehow we always knew… Surely faith was strong enough with love to get us through. And through the years we lived our life with reverence and with pride. Remembering that somehow God was always by our side. the clouds have silver linings. The sun shined through the rain. Our twelve years …a sweet love song of Angels’ refrain.

Answer #1

Hi! Your poem is a wonderful gift for your hubby. Gifts like these are absolutely priceless. You can’t buy a gift like yours in a store. I’m sure that you are a fantastic cook. Your hubby is lucky to have such a loving wife. Happy Anniversary!!! and Many, Many More!!!

Answer #2

I liked it a lot it is very sweet he should love it

Answer #3

congratulations

Answer #4

thats good!!!

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