Graphic poem, do you like it?

Mommy Never Came By: Britne Vinson

As I laid there in my bed All I could think in my head Is how you left me there alone All over my body was his cologne I remember how it all went down He came into my room dressed like a clown I looked at him with confused eyes Was this going to be a surprise of mine? He said come here and held out his hands So I placed down my Barbie’s and head bands I was young and had no idea That this surprise of mine would involve my tears I smiled and walked past the fan He picked me up, and out you ran I wondered why you left so quick But daddy told me just to sit So on his lap he kissed my cheek Lifted up my skirt for just a peek I began speak to ask what was this But he cursed at me and pinch my wrist I held in my cry I could tell he was mad I wished my mom didn’t leave because I was very sad He pulled out something from in his pants I couldn’t see it all just at a glance He began to move my panties and placed it inside I yelled very loud and my dad moved me like a ride I was five and didn’t like this new game I screamed and cried wishing my mommy came I kicked, hit, and scratched his face Trying my hardest to get out of this place He took it out and smacked me hard I flew into my dresser and knocked over my cards
I crawled up into a ball I felt red stuff on my thighs and my jaw My daddy said that I was being bad I should listen to him so I don’t make him mad I said I don’t want to play with you anymore As quick as I could I ran naked out my door I fell down the steps because my legs were burning I could not believe my daddy would hurt me I heard him coming but I didn’t turn to see I saw you mommy and told you to help me You watched me stand there, tears strolling down But you told me its okay just don’t make a sound Then he took me by my hair And pulled me back up the bloody stairs My daddy threw me on my bed And beat me hard and banged my head Finally he left I laid and cried Rubbing my head and holding my side I hope no one has to ever feel that pain That I felt, when I was five, and my mommy never came

Answer #1

Whoah. That was… I cant even explain it touching AWESOME job

Answer #2

wow that was simply amazing not a lot of people write about subjects like this anymore its all about love now very good:D

Answer #3

omg that is so sad. I am so sorry. oh, wow. I agree with sumagrl, it was touching…I loved it.wonderful, great job.

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