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Are these lyrics good?

im asking what if these lyrics I wrote are good. please done say yes 2 make me feel good. just tell me the truth…

“ well I got up early this morning. I went to your room. but when I reached out to feel you, I remember everything! you were on your way home, but every time you looked at her, I knew I saw sumthing lite in u… and thats all I’ve dun 4 u. but I dont reely agree wit that… gimme nother chance, baby. because if you leev ma life 4ever, I dont think ill live!”

and thats all I have so far. please reply

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Answer #1

ummm,I guess its ghud,I want to hear more

Answer #2

Lol there pretty good. and I bet thay mean something you fancyed someone but you can tell he likes someone else but you just want to another chance with them its really sweet

Answer #3

I agree that actually sounds really good, little hint though if you want to get it released dont go posting it on the net cause someone out there may take it and if you havent copyrighted it than you’ll loss it but im sure you prob already know that

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