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another poem

YET ANTOTHER POEM, THIS ONES CALLED THROIGH MY SMALL GLASS WINDOW

THROUGH MY SMALL GLASS WINDOW. my life ios like a small glass window so delicate to the touch, you say you know a life is worth a whole times amount of love but my heart has been stolen and broken shattered in to 1,000,000 (millon) peices I know that you say that you can mend me but the truth is is that you can’t you try to make it easier to make this easier but all your doing is making it worse my life is now not a window but the shattered remains of one you bring me my heart back mended but not fully complete I look at you and then this is defeat you look at me and the same goes for you but then the heartache returns for a while. why is my vision going dark oh no I’m gone

THE END :)

TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. THIS POEM IS THE FIRST ONE THAT I’VE EVER WRITTEN IN MY POETRY JOURNAL. SO PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK. COMMENTS OR PREJUDICES ARE OK. I DON’T CARE. LOL :)

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Answer #1

wow… I dont know what 2 write

Answer #2

thank you that was nice.

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