( another freestyle) take the world

((( me again ^^ my freestyle might suck but you have to think I make them in like 10 min no writing down plus am a new freestyler ) yea yea people dream of the perfect house and life but that aint for me. you dont know me yet but am one of the baddest to walk the street. you thought scarface was a G. am bigger then scarface. I got the whole masterplan right here sitting in my hand. am the master of this. when my plan happen. ill go down in the history. as one of the greatest to ever live. people will read it so many time. like am a god. am here for life. I going to take the world by storm. just like. B.I,G did. but ill do more damaged to it. am so young with so many plan. am so smart. why aint my head so big. people call me dumb all the time. people want to battle me in freestyling. but dude you dont know the power I behold. I can spit one line. and your whole life will be turn upside down. so dont come to me with all this talk about how trash I am. cause when I spit them words. you wont be able to speak no more. am a nightmare came real. like jason. ill slice you up with my words so bad. it wont even be funny. the world is going to change. cause when my storm come. it wont go away. yea yea yea. time to take this world by storm

Answer #1

A little…conceited-sounding, but hey! That might get you far in this world :) It’s written well.

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