A poem for the soilders

Call the shots as they fall Keep those people safe and sound While you take their places found All of those people take their lives Everyday Some people will die

Can you save them Will they live Or will their lives Be gone to sin

Can they be saved Can they be sparred Or will their lives Be a blinding blurr

They lose their lievs Fighting for our country fare They save this pround country Shouldn’t they be sparred?

We fight the wars We win the battles But no one dear friends Should lose without a statue

So remember my friends How our war will be Together or apart No matter what we are The land of the Free. :)

Did you like it? Should I put it in my book that I am publishing? Is it good?

Xx randi xx

Answer #1

wow that was a goood one!! very good one.. my boyfriend’s in the marines..ima send it to him! :)

(dont worry I’ll say you wrote it)

Answer #2

ditto, I liked it a lot, good message:).

Answer #3

It’s good, nicely done.

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