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Never Let Go: She sits there and covers her eyes To hide the tears that were shed Because she is despised Feeling that she’d been shoot in the heart with lead

Not sure who to love Not sure if anyone loves her She’s always the outcast, never above Nobody who understands, just an empty bottal of liqueur

As she sits there in pain, she starts to wonder Why canmt anyone hear her cries? Can’t anyone see she’s going under? Or do they see what they want, lies.

This was her doomed fate Cause fate had finally found her, times up Her hero has come to late This was her last close up.

Now they’ll understand Now they’ll see How could they misunderstand If what they now see is guarantee.

What she don’t know Is the pain she will cause. Because they didn’t show And they surely didn’t applause.

She never saw How much love she had All she saw was flaw Now they have a lifetime of sad.

They learned a valuable thing To tell everyone they care To never leave it on a string And let them know there their.

Because you never know If this will be the last hello So stop and take things slow To let them know You’ll never let go <3

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Answer #1

Wow, that just blew me away…and I write poetry too… you have a lot of talent my dear…keep at it!

I hope you save all you work so some day you can have it published! :)

good luck with all you do & keep writing!

Answer #2

Dats’ really Goooood your very talented.

Answer #3

that was beautiful all most shed tears :,-]]

Answer #4

wow thts really good ur a total bad ass for tht lol(:

Answer #5

Very beautiful. youve got talent :)

Answer #6

Thank yu very much :)

Answer #7

Thanks :)

Answer #8

Thank you, The same happened to me when I reread it lol

Answer #9

you are very welcome :) I was so inspired I wrote something myself! Not as brilliant…but in 15 mins…:)

Answer #10

Lmao Thanks (:

Answer #11

Muchas gracias :)

Answer #12

I saw what yu wrote and for 15 mins of writing it I did love it :)

Answer #13

@ tinycrazeaddiction and @temptress wow both of u are good! post more i am interested in poetry plz

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