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Is this a good poem?

whether it be half wild rapturing to the point of mentally grotesque. lashes traversing, inadaquately bathed in sweat. Ever feeling, ever forgetting, ever singing. a tranquil heart tilling amist the shadows. Tangents. Poor tourmented enlightened spirit racing the streets. outlying existance, goodbye world, an hour at last, raising forth all that was so brutally stamped into the dirt. immense immutable angelic, so it has enthralled.

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Answer #1

like this I think.

whether it be half wild rapturing to the point of mentally grotesque. lashes traversing, inadaquately bathed in sweat. Ever feeling, ever forgetting, ever singing. a tranquil heart tilling amist the shadows. Tangents. Poor tourmented enlightened spirit racing the streets.

outlying existance, goodbye world, an hour at last, raising forth all that was so brutally stamped into the dirt. immense immutable angelic, so it has enthralled. …great poem… keep it up

Answer #2

WOW! is right haha thats really good!!! gives big hand of applause to u haha :P

Answer #3

wow,,, I like it!! if you wrote it, thats sweome, keep up the great work!

Answer #4

It’s good. You should write in poem form though.

Answer #5

how do you do that?

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