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Burn the midnight oil
the night sky is a lucid beauty
the fire stars burn it black
like liquid
It is divine
it is true beauty
it is what we see
my sky,
my sky
big and wide and vast
makes me want to cry
makes me breathe
like my soul just died
and was r...

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what do you think of these poems?

I see no reason why you fear me,
to hurt you would destroy me.
I see not why you avoid me,
for only when your with me do we ever see your smile.
its as though you understand me
but also seems confused by me.
your beauty is entrancing, like a rose among...

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WRITING P0RTF0LI0 HELP!!! (P0EMS)

0k s0 I am putting a writing p0rti0fli0 t0gether but it is 0nly p0ems... I have 6 p0ems if you can just rate them each 0n a 1-5 scale
1- Terribble
2- Bad
3- Average/0kay
4- Great
5- Fantasitic
0k s0 p0em 0ne is ab0ut...
1.) Silenced
s0mething t...

47 views · Education & School

What do you think of my story?

Here's the story, hope you like it,

“it was there,” the old man said and pointed at the concrete a few feet away. “there she died.”
Inhaling deeply he began his story. “jayne and richard, our son who later had a sex change to be come jayne, our daug...

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I think... I think I love my cousin (romanticly)

This isnt my only post I just never get straght answers and mostly I get thats weird or thats toatly gross and incest is nasty. 1st things first its not incest you idiots I did my research secodn of all it not weird in all countries liek try india its ...

48 views · Love & Relationships

Who wants to complete this?

1red rose or white?
2salt or pepper?
3pink or blue?
4hamburgers or hot dogs?
5music or movies?
6comedy or horror?
7action or adventure?
8summer or winter?
9sun or stars?
10hott or cute?
11walk or run?
12funny or romantic?
13crun...

55 views · General Knowledge

My story?

I wrote this when I was 9 or 10, now I'm13 how is it so far?any advice? I know it sux since I wrote when I was younger so yeah...I'm stuck with this story..

When Love falls.
I waited for Armand, his full ...

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Why can't I get over my trip on weed?

Okay so I used to be a MAJOR pot head, I mean the first few times smoking I did freak out and I wanted it to be over, but soon I was in lovee with weed. Until one day I smoked more than I had ever smoked before, and trust me thats a lot. This time it w...

204 views · Health

SHES A BOY STEALING COW

ok so I started my 2nd secondary school a little late in year 7, I was talking to a popular boy who I thought was just a regular guy I was glad people were talking to me asking me the silliest questions but I was happy I was making friends,including w...

15 views · Sex NSFW

Pathetic cousin

Ok so I started my 2nd secondary school a little late in year 7, I was talking to a popular boy who I thought was just a regular guy I was glad people were talking to me asking me the silliest questions but I was happy I was making friends,including wi...

39 views · Sex NSFW

What do you think of all my poems?

No one knew about her
And all the shame she hides
About her family and her pride
No one cared about her

She tried telling someone
but no one gave a damn
No one seemed to understand
All the pain and suffering she had

She told someone how she felt
Abou...

45 views · Art, Writing & Literature

what my life is like now ? read and comment?

I had a nice life as a child I had the nicest grand mother in the world (or so i taught ). My grandmother raised me from the minute i was born until i was 18 years old she taught me the values and morals i needed to go through life.

she was my id...

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The doctors are stumped! Any suggestions?

I was a healthy 27 year old female until 2 months ago when I got three sessions of sclerotherapy injections (around 50-60 injections) per session. It could just be a coincidence, but I was healthy before this. I do have polycystic ovarian syndrome, hyp...

58 views · Health

What.. I just wrote this yesterday, what do yall think (Its long)?

Im With You..

Me and my Momma were in a different town, about fifty minutes away from home, visiting one of her friends from work. I was dragged by my ears, so it seemed. I didn't want to be there.. Its not like it was MY friend. So, why shou...

24 views · Art, Writing & Literature

How different people have sex,

How they have sex, think of more? Post it:)

Accountants are good with figures.

Actors do it on cue.

Advertisers use the "new, improved" method.

Ambulance drivers come quicker.

Ansi does it in the standard way

Archeologists like it old...

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Do you know bands like the ones on my iTunes?

Alright... Looking for some good bands that I dont already know.

Let's go through my iTunes... (and maybe you'll find something nice:] )
30 Seconds To Mars
311
50 Cent (haha)
The A'z
A Change Of Pace
A Rocket To The Moon
Adam and Andrew xD
AFI
Afro m...

54 views · Music

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