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A while back, I (Sebastian Szukalski) began to write a short story.

It developed into something I rather like, but I need some constructive criticism from the lovely people of FA. So, if anyone is bothered to read this, I'd greatly appreciate feedback. Please and tankyou :)

WARNING : contains dark themes such as in ...

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Ok please listen and please if you can help,I really need it

Ok I'll try to make this easy and fast

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I am about to be 15 years old and I want to move out...
I know I'm very young and no I'm not physically abused... I think?
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How can I help my friend, or even support her after I read something like this she wrote?

I wake up in the morning and know how the day is going to turn out.
A lot of people say being positive will make it all better, but I've been positive for so long with nothing in return. Well, I guess that's not true. I haven't tried hard enough, I su...

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I am married to a man I have known almost 30 years. (platonic)Third marriage for both of us. We have been married a little over two years. Right from the beginining we had problems.He is not the person I thought he was.We argue often because I am const...

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Random Strange Survey

Is there anybody you just wish would fall off the planet?: aha yeah, kind of
How do you flush the toilet in public?: I rarely use public restrooms, ICK! When I do I fluch with my foot. =]
Do you wear your seatbelt in the car?: Not always, no.
Name on...

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1. Last beverage ~ lovely water.

2. Last phone call~ My dad, what a nightmare.

3. Last kiss~ I don't kiss and tell.

4. Last song you listened to~ I wanna go - Britney Spears

5. Last time you cried~ I don't keep a tab of when I cry.

HAVE YOU EVER:


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How would you critique this short story I wrote not long ago?

My feet pounded upon the rocky road slicing my bare feet. Hammering in my chest my heart beat wildly. What have I done? Why do I precede to commit such acts of sin? The street lamps shinned a dim yellow illuminating the streets as I ran faster than I h...

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What does everybody think of this story??

Part 1:
Introduction-
As the blade grew deeper in her arm, Daina forgot about everything on her mind. The only thing she felt was the growing pain coming from her bloody limb. She hated her life, and everyone in it. Nobody felt the sever pain and fea...

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99 Things About You/Fun Survey

I wanna know more about as many funadvice members as possible. I told you, so now you tell me! XD

1. ONE OF YOUR SCARS, HOW DID YOU GET IT? my ankle, shaving. I'm dangerous with sharp objects.

2. WHAT IS ON THE WALLS IN YOUR ROOM? spiderwebs

3. DO ...

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tell me what you think of this? please!

Hi, could you please read my gcse creative writing piece and tell me what you think, I I can improve it in anyway, any advice really or help! it's not finished.
Thanks

Diary entry
Monday 24th October 1999

Dear Diary,

I was once a person fi...

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New and improved version of GCSE essay

Hi, I just improved my gcse creative writing essay, actually finished it. please read and give me advice on any ways I can improve it, any help is appreciated, I need it.
Thanks
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Dear Diary,

I was once a person filled with dreams that I wanted to p...

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Messiah from Islam, Judaism, Christian?

Which is the real AntiChrist? Muslims? The Cristians? or the Jews?
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JUDAISM

The concept of...

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Short story +updated+ *Horror/Gore/murder*

There are only 3 questions on everyone’s lips
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