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What do you think of my poetry ?

You judge me by my style you seem to choose my fate I know that you don’t know me, but yet you put me in my place. You gossip with your friends as I walk down the hall, you seem to just pretend that I’m not there at all. I catch your evil glances but they don’t bother me, you act like I should care, it’s like no one ever sees. How you treat the different, the ones who are not fake you know you won’t be laughing if you lived their life today. At school you’re such an ass, a liar and a fake, you really have it easy but you hide all that you take. You cover it with a smile we cover it with tears; you know you’re very blind and vile while we battle all our fears. Loving isn’t easy but hating even harder, but lying isn’t worth it even I know that. If hurting brings you pleasure do it to yourself, if loving makes you sick then don’t do another thing else. Love me or hate me it could be worse, but you’re still the reason of every single verse.

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Answer #1

This is really good, as is your other poems. I like the flow of the words and they work very well with each other.. Some lines rhymed and it wasn’t extremely obvious like as though you just threw it in. Good job, continue writing poetry, you’re very good at it!

Answer #2

ugh, i love it! i hope you continue to write. this poem was so…true. and some people are afraid to say what you did. but you did, and i love your poems. eep writing!! =)

Answer #3

this was Amazing it really spole to me in the deepest of ways!

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