Dreams do come true

I wrote these lyrics and I wanted your opinion(both guys and girls)…Angels are in Heaven, Robots are in Space

I’m from a place where… The grass is blue, and my skies are green This is my heaven on earth, all im missing is the wings I’m an angel… I’m from a place where… The stars dont shine, the sun ain’t bright I’m surrounded by darkness, no moon at night No light, iim the only existence, no life… And my earth is just empty…empty And my summers carry cold nights And I’ve been a prisoner of my own my my whole life…right! I’m from a place where… The rain never stops, it floods The pain never stops, because…it could never be what is was The blood bleeds from the pen, the ink bleeds from my skin As I float on the wind, life full of sins…when! It feels like im living in hell I count on my angels to let my heavens prevail…well!… Everyday I keep hopeN That God get my message even though I pray with my eyes open I done walk through the fire, been through the smoke and When the wheels of fortune feel off I just kept on rolling… They say if you love it, then you should let it go and.. But What if it hurts too much to let it go and… I had way to much pride to let it show and.. I had way to much pride to let you know damn!.. I could never hate on you But I seen the break up comming, Tha ish felt like deja vu!. Cause you broke my heart.. Ya see I was falling in love now im falling apart…and I thought…