a poem for my B/F what do you think?

‘when I am in his arms im in heaven When I lean into his kiss nothing else matters When I look into his eyes every thing is perfect When I hear his voice time stops When I hear him say I love you we are the only 2 people on earth When I see him my heart stops When I hug him everything is right ‘

What do ya think … Please tell me if I should give this to him

Answer #1

I cant rhyme so I just call it a naritve so it doesnt have to … lol

Answer #2

I love it you should give it to him and fast

Answer #3

I’m sure he’ll love it! the words are real sweet and you wrote it just for him! =)

Answer #4

Thats sweet:) you shudd giv it tew hym!

Answer #5

yes give it to him right now

Answer #6

if you love him take the chance and find out if his love is real. also, a poem should rhyme .

Answer #7

aww thats cute

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