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This poem...so new it's warm! thoughts?

Asked by gochigocha 2 months ago, 2 answers.

Sweet daddy i’m coming home
To that place, the dark lost space
I’m sinking back into your arms
Swimming in the empty thoughts
Daddy I have come back
Just like I always do
Sweet daddy, you’re glad to see me
I can feel it in your gaze
My eyes have lost...

that shine
Just like you always wanted
And a smile is just a reflex now
I’ve learned all the words by heart
Yes here I am again
Take me in, let me be yours again
I have tried to run away
But I always come back, you know
In that dark corner, you’ll always find me
Drifting through my blank thoughts
Crouched up on my bed lying
Shutting out the world i’m flying
Flying high, i’m flying away
Come on fly with me…

Answered by lexxi5 on Sep 18, 2009, 10:43PM
196 answers

its great!!!
congrats
by daddy do you mean literally daddy or like boyfriens or husband?

Answered by steph_is_utterly_mad on Sep 18, 2009, 11:43PM
190 answers

:D Love it, actually!

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