What you think of my new poem?

I promised I would always love you , you promised you would always love me
I promised I would never let go , you promised you would never leave
but baby I know this love is for real , but baby you tell a different story
with the weaking in your eyes and the look on your face, baby I know your love is never gna be real ,

That sounds more like a song.

its great!!!

ya it's great!

great I could see it as a song too!

thanks =]