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Do you like my new poem?

PWT's rock!!! Asked by plainwhitets 9 months ago, 4 answers.

I just wrote so give me some pointers!

Rain Drips
into the gutters
onto the streets
Rain is everywhere
Falling
it drips down the windowpane
and flows into the lane
flowing through the streets
flooding my mind
part of nature
part of me

TA-DA!!! What do you think?

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Meh. Answered by neon_shards on Dec 17, 2007, 05:44PM
| 15 answers.

Not amazing. But definately good.
You should make it rhyme more.

=]

PWT's rock!!! Answered by plainwhitets on Dec 17, 2007, 05:46PM
| 570 answers.

Its not supposed to rhyme
I'm not a rhyming person

Meh. Answered by neon_shards on Dec 17, 2007, 05:48PM
| 15 answers.

Eh, then in that case, nevermind.
Good job.

Answered by hunay on Dec 17, 2007, 05:54PM
| 256 answers.

loveee it

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