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Do you like my new poem?

Asked by plainwhitets about 1 year ago, 4 answers.

I just wrote so give me some pointers!

Rain Drips
into the gutters
onto the streets
Rain is everywhere
Falling
it drips down the windowpane
and flows into the lane
flowing through the streets
flooding my mind
part of nature
part of me

TA-DA!!! What do...

you think?

Answered by neon_shards on Dec 17, 2007, 05:44PM
14 answers

Not amazing. But definately good.
You should make it rhyme more.

Answered by plainwhitets on Dec 17, 2007, 05:46PM
548 answers

Its not supposed to rhyme
I'm not a rhyming person

Answered by neon_shards on Dec 17, 2007, 05:48PM
14 answers

Eh, then in that case, nevermind.
Good job.

Answered by hunay on Dec 17, 2007, 05:54PM
238 answers

loveee it

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