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What do you think of my song?

I wrote a song and I was wantin to no what people thought of it ok here it goes I hope you can find it to forgive me youve been pushed around and took all my bruises for me im all out of faith this is how I feel its never to late regardless of who you are it started out with that perfect kiss member all the things we wanted goodtimes start to fade im lucky just to linger in your life I finally found my way say goodbye to yeserday im bustin loose I don’t know where I’ve been but im afraid of going back again if you only knew you help me live and learn

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Answer #1

O well no I didnt its bout my ex

Answer #2

im sorry I wasnt trying to be negative its good I was just asking if you got your insperations from her songs

Answer #3

Ehh,people dissing on a questions sight… how lame…

Answer #4

started with a perfect kiss, thats sorta like kelly clarksons already gone

Answer #5

ohnestly its not the best, what you need to do is get a beet going use the beet to influense how you sing the words on the trails and dragouts you also need more content, basically make it longer and you need some rhymeing. not trying to be meen but you askeds and I’ve been in several differant bands and every time im asked to write the music because im good at it, I’ve even been asked to write music for other bands.so try what I said.

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