What do yall think of this poem?

My love doth have beautiful, big, brown eyes, One gaze and I am lost in them forever. The face of an angel, on earth, disguise, With the most adorable freckles ever.

A smile that makes dentists green with spite, Yet with a small hint of a wild side. When we talk everything is beyond right The world freezes while I cast it aside.

I count the seconds when we are away, All texts, calls, and love songs I think of you Wishing together we could always stay, Walking as one, hand in hand, through and through.

When we are old and time is at an end. I know you will forever be my friend.

Answer #1

its ok actually

Answer #2

I liked it. Was that written for someone? I write poems to, but they are mostly for my significant other.

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