What do you think of my poem ?

The sadness in my eyes. The hurting in my heart. The fake smile on my face keeping me from falling apart.</3

The feelings I get when im with you. The feeelings I get when im not. The feeling I have for you are all I got.

The way you take my breath away. The way you make me smile. The way you make me feel my life is worth while.<3

Answer #1

I like your poem(: I don’t know how much yoou right but voicesnet.org is a website to share poems, and stories, songs, etc. You might want to try it out I don’t know just an idea (:

Answer #2

hey I like it, kinda emo and sad

Answer #3

Mee likey(:

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