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Just a little poem I wrote quite recently. =)

Its pretty depressing but just bear with me aite! :) Its called ‘Alone’.

This is my time. Whether I want to stand on my own 2 feet or bury myself in a grave. No one can help me this time. No one can take away this loneliness and pain I’m going through. Struggling and gasping for air is what I’m doing everyday. Shaken, knowing that I’m really all alone.

I’ve felt the coldness of this world. I know the hypocrites are darting their eyes on me. So far I’ve not failed the battle of this war. Everyday I continue stuggling and facing the fears inside me.

Asking for a helping hand is what I used to do. But I am all alone now. Alone is what I want to be. No one will understand how I feel. No one cares how I feel. Even though they try to understand, they never will.

Alone again is where I am. Bleeding slowly, The wounds just won’t heal. Peacefulness, that just ain’t for me. When will this end? I don’t know. But I know I can do this. So here I am, Facing the battles in life, Alone.

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Answer #1

I love it. Exactly what I feel!

Answer #2

Good Job :)

Answer #3

wow that was pritty good totally an 8 outta 10! your really good

Answer #4

I really like it. a lot.

Answer #5

That’s amazing hun! = ]

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