What do you think of this improvised poetry?

What do you think of this? I dont want to be a superman. I just wanna be the one who heal her heart. Her smile is the meal of my soul i want my boat stays forever in her port. I want the fire of my love will melt her tears so cold,and will erase her fears. Make her happy its my biggest goal.

This is just a thought. What do you think? Any opinion is welcome.

Answer #1

i like it :)

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