Another song I wrote.

‘Don’t have to miss you’

[verse 1] When I first saw you, I knew that it couldn’t be, You were too awesome to be with me. I lived so far away, but you told me you liked me too, I had to go home but I wanted to stay with you.

[chorus] And now I miss you, I want to hold you hand, I want to feel you , I want you to be my man. I need to see you, I want to know you’re near, I really miss you, I need you here.

[verse 2] It’s been 6 months now, since I saw your pretty face, I’m going crazy, It’s just too much to embrace. But I’ve had enough now, you get to see your girl, So prepare now, I’m gonna rock your world!

[chorus] Because I miss you, I want to hold your hand, I want to feel you, I want you to be my man. I need to see you, I want to know your near, I really miss you, I need you here.

[bridge] Oh, you are my everything, I want you more than anything. Today’s the day we don’t have to wait no more, Come on boy, walk out your front door….

[chorus] Now…. I don’t have to miss you, I can hold your hand, I’m feeling you, yeah, and I know you are my man. I can see you and now you are so near, I don’t have to miss you, ‘cause your right here.

I think I love you, I really love you, I don’t have to miss you, ‘Cause your right here. =]

So what do you think??

Answer #1

I like it. is very cute. :)

Answer #2

wowch. ^_^. thts a cute song. lol. perhaps the new jason mraz’s im yours? lol.

Answer #3

it’s not perfect but it’s quite good. have you got music for it yet? keep at it. and good on ya!

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