What do you think of my poem?

Drip Drop...Drip Drop
There Goes Another Thought
A Tear Running Down My Face
Nobody Could Ever Take Your Place

The Clouds Are Blue, The Sun Is Shining
And I'm Sitting Here Crying
The Wind Is Blowing, Its Getting Cold
Its Time Now, The Story Is...

Told

Remember Some Memories, Forget The Rest
Close Your Eyes, And Take A Deep Breath
Its All Leaving Now, Almost Past
Just The Memories, I Know Will Last

To Me Your There, But Also Here
I'm Not At Risk, But Full Of Fear
Your Everywhere I Go,To Me
It Was All Supposed To Leave,But Its Here, Forgive Me,Please

Where Did You Go, Where Are You Now
I'll See You Again, Not Sure How
Please Come To Me, Never Leave
We'll Be Full Of Happiness, And Relief

Do You Look Into That Girls Eyes, Kiss Her Lips
You Can Tell Shes Happy, By The Way She Skips
See That Way Shes Skipping, Look At Her Go
Its Beautiful, Makes Me Sad Though

That Used To Be Me, That Girl Right There
That Was When, You Had Time To Spare
Now Its Her, Instead Of Me
Are Your Going To Set Her Free

Tell Her You Cant Live Without Her
Tell Her, Tell Her You Love Her
And You Always Will, With All Your Heart
Then Shoot Her With That Painful Dart

Should I Move On, And Not Stop
I Would Try, But I Would Just Drop
How Do I Start Again, After The End
Are You Just Another Guy, Or Are You My Friend

So Many Questions, Problems Unsolved
This Isn't A Game, That Can Be Resolved
Its True, Its Real
Its The Way, I Really Feel

Tick Tock, Your Running Out Of Time
If You Don't Want Me, That's Fine
No Saying Sorry, No Running Back
I Refuse To Take It, I Know It For A Fact

I Don't Want It To End, Don't Want It To Go Away
I Just Want, You To Stay
Talk To Me, Let Me Understand
Like We Said, The Way We Planned

My Time Is Up, Its Gone
Please, Don't Get Me Wrong
Good-Bye For Now, Talk To You Soon
So I Wish, Upon The Stars And The Moon

did u make that up???
if u did thats like sooo awsome!
your a true poet!!!

This is a really GREAT poem!!! Do u write poems a lot because if u dont u need to start becuase this was beautiful. U could probably publish your own poem book. if u have other great ones like this one!!!

ok...one word...WOW! that was amazing...thats something u should really look into...if your not already!!

great poem.

3Paige

I like it...it's kind of sad, but I like it, I almost feel broken hearted. Keep up the great work

this poem is awesome! best I've heard in a long time!!!

I like it, very poignant. I especially like the way it begins. You're really talented, any poetry I try and make is nothing compared to this - I don't think I'll try anymore!

Thanks everyone.
I dont write very often, it has to be a really strong emotion
for me to write about feelings. I try but it doesnt always
turn out great. Thanks everyone I appreciate it.

danbob

I see poetry as art, it's neither wrong nor right, it's how one expresses themselves, everyone has their own style and rhythm, so you shouldn't compare your work with someone elses.

amazing! you should definitely look into bein a poet!

I loved it so great I know how it is though all of my poems suck I'm not good at all unlike you of corse some people get at the talent keep righting!

that is awesome!!! Did ya really write that???

I love this peom !!!
it kinda makes me think of I guy my ex thanx your poem helped me !
your really good keep up the work !
katlyn

One Word.
BEAUTIFUL! =)
good job this poem is really nice.

WOW
ITS A GOOD POEM
did you make it up?!
I LUV IT!!

wow long and good ^_^

I LOVE IT!!
YOUR SO TALENTED

awesome ,...! you r really a talented...
I poem is tooo good
go a head with you r skill of writing poems

I like that. Very nice and carefully constructed. Nice vocab too. I like.

pretty good
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^_^
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There's something about it... when I read it, it sounded different to other peoms. It's really good.