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My poem, tell me what you think

Shark Atack Asked by funadvice about 1 year ago, 2 answers.

I WISH I DIDN'T MISS YOU!

I don't know what to say
Or even where to start
But I never would have guessed
It'd be you to break my heart

You can just walk away
But I don't feel the same
My love for you was true
And to you it was all a game

I...

wish there were a way
I could go back in time
To hold you in my arms
As if you were still mine

Please someone tell me when
This pain will go away
When I'll forget the past
And move on to another day

A day where just for once
Your face won't cross my mind
I won't think of our memories
I'll just leave them all behind

I won't think of our good nights
Or the way you made me feel
I'll move on to someone new
Someone whose love is real

I won't miss your arms around me
Holding me so tight
I won't long to feel your body
Pressed against mine through the night

The memory of your kiss
Will finally disappear
And never again for you
Shall I shed another tear

I say all this right now
Wishing it would be true
But I know tonight, I'll go to bed,
Crying over you

...I miss you

yeahh Answered by rhinestone_bullets on Aug 06, 2008, 11:59PM
313 answers

omfg I love the crying over you part. the way people end poems is always my favorite. BRAVO!!!*applause* make more poems!!

my fav pic Answered by stacilaine on Aug 09, 2008, 08:20PM
16 answers

omg...I love this,,,it reminds me of my ex...this got me crying

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