Another poem, tell me what you think...

I tried to be who you wanted
I tried my very best
changed my hair, changed my life
now I've nothing left

It isn't ever easy
being someone you're clearly not
trying to please those around you
you change your mind a lot

So this is my decision
whether...

you like it or not
change back my hair, change back my life
and you'll be someone, I simply forgot

thanks...

I think its a really nice poem and I dont normally like them but I thought that this one was pretty cool!
I dont know if im right but it sounds like guys or girls that change themselves to make others like them ,but then you find out that its bettter to love yourself for who you are or they are not going to like you because its NOT youx
I dont know if im right but that what it sounds like when I read itx
but I supose that the whole point of poems is that they could mean anything!

Usually I don't read poems on this site, but I think this one is cute...nothing too complicated...it's cute, at least this is how I see it. Anyway, I'd like to tell you that if I were you I would take out the phrase with the hair's colour or I would add another, deeper verse about how my life was changed in bad - and this is mainly because changing your hair colour isn't very emotional

lol, okies, thank you guys

Really good! there are a lot of people who do this sort of thing in life and they do forget who they really are! Its best to be yourself in life it makes you a lot happier to be true to yourself!