Poem yet again..tell me what you think

Now she is

Now She is walking,
Walking out on life
Now She is running,
Running from the strife

Now she is praying,
Has been praying for a while
Now she is faking,
Faking a sweet smile

Now she is thinking,
Thinking what to do
Now she is...

planning,
Planning a goodbye to you

Now she is crying,
Crying all alone
Now she is giving up,
Giving up on her own

Now she is hurting,
Hurting from the pain
Now she is standing,
Standing in the rain

Now she is yelling,
Yelling for no reason
Now she is changing,
Changing like a season

Now she worthless,
Worthless she is seeming
Now she is losing,
Losing all meaning

Now she leaving,
Leaving us to ask why
Now she has done it,
Has done suicide

It's awesome I will admit,it sounds like the girl was alone and felt like she had no meaning for life and the only way she could get out was putting herself to eternal sleep. Good job!

Haha:D
You wrote that yourself?
I love it

Once again that's really good. I prefer funny little simple rhyming poems, but that is still really good, you've depressed me for the night. (lol)

your a really good poet I wish I could ryt poem my fam say im good and a fortune teller told me ill be a poet when im older lol but yh good job keep doing poems you might get some where lol

wow really good!!! that is amazing, the best I've read in a while!!! keep it up