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Who can help me put this into a poem

on an island Asked by greek3nny 6 months ago, 4 answers.

Okay I know your gona Say its Kinda Good Alredy. but with another person help. it be even better.. I was wondering could any of you help me put this into a rhyming poem! so it sounds really amazing! Even if you try to and not that good at it please do...

because it gives me more ideas Thanks !

I could never explain why I love you so much,
It's your eyes, your smile, your soft gentle touch.
You were on my mind when I woke up this morning
remembering your smile
I guess the next time I'll see your face
will take a little while
I was remembering your arms around me
love the way they always feel warm
with you by my side
I completely feel no harm
I was remembering your voice
makes my heart skip a beat
but without you baby
my whole body's weak
The more I think, the more I weep,
at least I have memories to keep I miss you more than words can say,
I think of you each single day
I'll always love you til the end
I get this amazing feeling from my head down to my toes,
I cant explain it I'm like the only one who knows
You can’t image how crazy you’re driving me.
I feel like nothing will ever be same.
It’s like being in hell for all eternity.
Just replaying a horrible game
I’ll always love you,
Nothing can take that away.
I just don’t know what to do!
I wish I could be the one by your side
Telling you everything's gonna be alright
I wish I could be the one who falls asleep next to you at night
And the one you make up with after a fight
I knew that you was special
I could tell right from the start
Is that I remember every word
Every single thing you says
Everything I've heard
For You Are The One
by Zach
For you I would climb
The highest mountain peak
Swim the deepest ocean
For its your love I seek.
For you I would cross
The rivers most wide
Walk the hottest desert
To have you at my side
Hoping one day you will change your mind

Fiance and I Answered by kristy87 on May 07, 2009, 12:56PM
3 answers

sounds amazing to me

car bumper 2 Answered by katie_ere on May 07, 2009, 01:02PM
293 answers

just need someone who can touch it up abit if you get me to satfiye me lol

Cemetery Answered by christinversion on May 07, 2009, 01:33PM
860 answers

I could never explain why I love you so much,
It's your eyes, your smile, your soft gentle touch.
I awoke this morning with you on my mind
I guess I won't see you for a while,
It'll take quite some time.

I was remembering your arms around me.
I loved the way they always felt so warm.
with you by my side,
I completely felt safe.

I was remembering your voice, so sweet.
The way it made my heart skip a beat
but now being without you, baby
It makes my body feel so weak.

The more I think, the more I cry.
atleat I'll always have the memories,
but I can't help to wonder why?
I'll always love you til' the end,
for you are my love, my closest friend.

I get this amazing feeling from my head down to my toes,
I cant explain it,
Will I only be the one to ever know?
You can’t image how crazy you’re driving me.
I feel like nothing will ever the be same.
It’s like being in hell for all eternity.
Just replaying a horrible game.

I’ll always love you,
Nothing can take that away.
I just don’t know what to do!
I wish I could be the one who stands beside you.
Telling you everything's going to be alright.

I wish I could be the one who falls asleep next to you every night,
the one you make up with after a fight.
I knew that you were special,
I could tell right from the start.

I remember every word,
everything you've ever said.
Everything I've heard you say.

For You Are The One,
Zach
For you I would climb,
the highest mountain peak.
Swim the deepest ocean,
For its your love I seek.

For you I would cross,
The rivers that are the most wide.
Walk the hottest desert,
To have you at my side
Hoping one day you will change your mind

Answered by khat on May 10, 2009, 05:16PM
83 answers

wow...
thats really good.
and every thing in that poem exsplains for me in my life.
I feel the same way about this
guy blake.
its just wow.
anyway your really good.

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