Believe it or not...i wrote a poem!

Right on valentines day I felt original just writing out a card for me girlfriend, so thought I would put a poem in, now the last time I wrote a poem was way back in school so was fearing the worst but she seemed to like it and I was showing one of her...

friends what a had said in it and they said they really liked it, so thought I would share it with you's to see what you think saying as it is 10 past 2 in the morning lol here it is...

Your like carbon dioxide to a tree
You make me photosynthesise
because your the only thing to be
To keep my heart alive

Your like an ocean to the fish
You give my heart a home
And for that I have just one wish
To never leave it alone

You are the strings to my guitar
And the tune you play is me
A piece of music so bizzare
But it puts my heart in glee

You are the shell to a snail
2 things but 1 they are
Alone these 2 are frail
But as 1 they will go far

But one thing that I know
The sky is always blue
The mole will always burrow
And I'll always love you!

Ooo, that's good~

But with To never leave it alone You should put To never leave me alone
Other than that, good job =D

I like it. Keep up the good work.

The mole will always burrow I like that line for some reason.

awww this is so cute. and well written =]

I wuffle that!!
if some one rote that fr me,I woold go crazzzi 4 them!!!
good job

I love it nice job!!

its really sweet(:

awww :]
its so cute and sweet

:'( thanks man I didnt know you felt that way about me. :'(
:P.. hey thats pretty gud man, keep at it.

WOW that was reallly goood.