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"devilish fool" (original poem i wrote!!)

Asked by loveskate 3 months ago, 1 answer.

this is about a guy who treated me like crap.I used to be in a realationship with him,and he was so verbally abusive! this is a poem dedicated to that jerk!

“Devilish Fool”

Your words anger me
Your touch kills
Your laugh annoys me
My world tilts

Your...

promises unkept
Your foolish green eyes
Withholding my regret
Of believing your lies

Your greedy pleasures
You explored of mine
Too much grief I measure
Of wasting my time

Your filthy hands
Once held my waist
I do not understand
Why I had such a taste

Your piercing smile
That sunk into me
I walk in denial
As I start to see

The devil himself, it was you
Who brought the pain I cherished
You are not the person I thought I knew
My soul lies perished

Answered by chmeon on Aug 18, 2009, 09:17PM
10 answers

Wow that's some deep stuff
awesome poem wink

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