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Here's a short poem i wrote to ponder on destiny, thoughts?

Me and Only Me!!! Asked by eaglewings about 1 year ago, 2 answers.

Here's a short poem I wrote to ponder on...

Destiny is where we are bound,
Is it surreal,
Or just a fantasy that...
Lingers on the edge of the earth,
As sure as the dolphin...
Swims in the sea,
Or a joke of paradox,
Going around swallowing,
Up all of...

its victims.

Written in 2003 on the way to a funeral, it was a family tragedy that happened this time of year. My great uncle lost his life in a fireworks warehouse explosion. Sometimes things happen in life that can cause you to think more deeply. I hope everyone has a happy and safe 4th of July. happy

What do you think of my poem?

"Fat $" Answered by bonsaiartistjackson on Jul 01, 2008, 04:09PM
15 answers

I like it. Timidly written yet deep in soulful context.
Happy 4th my friend :D

The mirror shot was accidental, :) Answered by gennaglessnerr on Jul 01, 2008, 04:36PM
578 answers

loveeed it, : )

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