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Is being so close a bad thing or can we for once show our affection for the ones we love cause if ot why do we ssay I love you if it doesnt show we say we love we say we hate but we all stay the same our lives are short so we love quick and hate long we dont second think we dont get a second chance so is being so close such a bad thing or for can we for once show our affection for the ones we love our love is strong our hate is weak we live these lives for the love we seek and we die from the hate we fear so is being so close a bad thing or can we for once show our affection for the ones we love cause if not why do we say I love you
Looks like you put a lot of thought into it, and that made it turn out beautifully. Continue to write great poems, for you my friend, have talent.
FunMail me for my poems sometime. =]
awesome job ...loved the poem you can turn it into a song too..if not I love the poem ...verry awesome job...u should ryte more
I love it :-)
effection is spelt A-F-F-E-C-T-I-O-N :-)
not to be a smart alec or anything...
that poem is so cool I love writing poems and you did an awesome. Sincerely. Christiana
it's cute! I loved it :) you should turn it into a song! it'd be nice :)
aww thats so cute whoever you give it to would love it lol
Awww I love it!!! Its awesome!!! good job!! =)
WOW! That is really really good:) Good Job!
Wow, I like it! Very nice. Good Job.
WOW!! thats awsome!! good job =D
I love the poem it is so cute!!
its soo cute. =]
love it. <3
i like it. it's really good. =)
I love it it was really good
woaah ! I lovee it ♥
sooo cute :-)
thats cute
I love it
Cute. <3
