What is Love

this is a poem that I wrote right after mym 4 years of high school. I’d like someone’s opinion (mainly a guy’s) so let me know what you think.

What is Love?

For what is love Is it a new beginning to shine happiness Or is it a fearful sword that will permanently slice your heart in two For everyone it’s an experience of either one or both.

However, I experienced the terrible My heart’s in two, unable to be stitched back together Because of love’s sometimes evil force Guys are cruel, mean, selfish, and a lot of other stuff.

For what is love I don’t know the meaning The only people who haved loved me truly are my family But I don’t see them often.

For what is love Is it the work of God, the sweet, caring person Or is it the work of Satan The cruel and unusual?

Answer #1

love is

love is my heart shinging for yours and the beginning to a happy ending love is my heart blinded by the peircing sword that cut your heart in half love is unpredicable,love is right or wrong

those experiences you have had,will only make me want to help you your heart might be in two,but my love and warmth will undo the for you a lie you have spoken forso many more love you your family, at least they are there for you…

a work of god or a creation from satan neither a man made problem,an accident created by a fool sweet yet cruel caring yet unusual

(I tried)

but your poem I truly like it its nice and not to deep but not to off its where it should be

Answer #2

very good!! I really like it..I can sooo relate!!!

Answer #3

I love you. its ok I know how you feel.

Answer #4

yup, love can make you do some crazy things.

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