What do you think of my song?

this is not the whole song. (WHEN I SAW YOUR EYES)

when I saw your eyes, I beileve there are no lies, what was it, was it your just passing by, I’m not lasten this long You just want a reactison because your always giveing me a action Your going to fast I can’t last this long you’ve got it all rong

CHORUS: When I saw your eyes, I’m sure there aint no lies I can’t bare with this no more, when I saw your eyes

this AINT THE HOLE SONG

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Answer #1

I think its really good:) hehe I try to make songs but im really bad at them

Answer #2

its ok

Answer #3

I like it so far its really good! but you spelt “wrong” wrong!

Answer #4

its aight not the best I’ve heard from a grage band though campared to others I give it 7 outa 10

Answer #5

It’s good so far, but check spelling. Maybe add a little more than the lies part, but it’s actually reallly good lyrics so far. Keep up what your writing :) I hope this helped. -courtney maria

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