What do you think of my funny love poem?

A Love Poem

Love is an entity Which very few have seen Most do not even know What love means

Love is when he Shows you how to beat ‘Brothers in Arms’ Til the games complete

Love is when he Gets mad When you kick his ass Using all the tips he had

Love is when he Cuddles you so tight And flicks you in the ear Just to start a flick fight

Love is when you’re So attached to him That if he wasn’t in your life The world would still be dim

Love is an entity Which very few have seen I am one of the people Who have.

How can I improve it? (I’m 14 by the way)

Answer #1

I love it, I just started to write poems so I can’t really help improve it. But it’s really good.

Answer #2

Its a very good poem, I love the humor. Age although doesn’t affect the way you write poetry its your knowledge and understanding of poetry itself. Also another contributing factor to poetry is your metaphorical language and literary language.

In my personal opinion the poem is just fine ;)

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