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Is my writing good?

it all seams like a scary dream that never wants to leave,

it’s haunting me in my dreams

and everyone is inside it.

it’s as if your dead to my head

but not to my heart even though I wish you really were.

yea, you need to listen.

you’ve broken my heart and now you want to do it all over again.

yea, you need to be there.

thrown it on the ground, ripped it to peices. No, never again.

Why do I always let you do this to me?

I’de say it’s because I love you but, it’s breaken me inside.

it all needs to end real soon.

You need to better yourself and.

yea, you need to listen

you’ve broken my heart and now you want to do it all over again.

yea, you need to be there.

thrown it on the ground, ripped it to peices. No, never again.

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Answer #1

no prob. :)

Answer #2

thanks

Answer #3

I like it

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