New Song!!! (Amanda)

Heres my latest song I wrote and hoping to be on my new cd. Hope hope you enjoy it. Comments, suggestions,and smartass remarks are appreciated! Here it is: “Amanda”

Just leave me alone Dont look at me with those eyes Please dont do anything Till you sit down and cry Leave your heart ungaurded Let your doubts sleep You dont have to tell me all of your secrets No some you should keep

Amanda Amanda Amanda may I be yours? Amanda Amanda

Dont think of no reasons Babe dont ask why I know your doubts are crawlin out But pretty soon you will fly

Amanda Amanda Amanda may I be yours? Amanda Amanda

You are amazing I really hope you know Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine

(Soft Acoustics) Amanda Amanda Amanda may I be? Amanda Amanda Amanda may I be? Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already mine Youre already Youre already

Amanda Amanda Amanda may I be yours? Amanda Amanda Amanda may I be?

Answer #1

you know; its kind of depressing that your best song is one about us fighting. =/

but its totally adorable that you hate me enough to write one. xd

I love youuu boo.

Answer #2

Pretty good. It would help to actually get to hear it rather than reading it. If I must offer even one criticism, it would have to be the name/title. There’s already at least three songs named ‘Amanda’ by Boston, Don Williams and Waylon Jennings, all pretty great songs that would offer some pretty stiff competition with memorability. Maybe change the name to Miranda or something similar. That way, when the song becomes a big hit, you can protect the identity of the girl you wrote it about and everyone will wonder who Miranda is.

Answer #3

oohhh I ♥♥♥ ittt sooo much!! ooohhh someones got a bestseller!!!1 lol hope you go platinum good luck ♥xoxosoph044

Answer #4

actually I think its great you can tell it has meaning… its beautiful

Answer #5

WOW Dude that’s amazing :)

Answer #6

:] youre amazing<3

Answer #7

Oh you sarcastic (aka very truthful) person!

Answer #8

I know why you have that username now. Good work.

Answer #9

Its pretty dope!

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