Native spanish speakers

Im latina but havent had much practice since my fathe rpassed away ( he is the onle who taught me spanish). im trying to practice again and translate everythingi write. I wanted to see if the way I translated was right . Id appreciate any grammatical corrections though. Dont be shy. thanks so much =)

A letter to god, Please keep my boyfriends father as healthy as possible. he has been through so much over the past few years I dont think he can take much more. he is a beautiful person with a kind spirit and loving/caring personality. it is true that all things are in your (god) hands, but if there any way you can watch over him and spare him, I would be truly grateful. In the name of jesus. Amen

Una carta a dios,

Por favor guarda a el papa de mi novio, why permitele estar en buena salud. mi novio ha pasado muchos apuros, why no creo que puede aguantar mas. El tiene un character bellisimo why esta de buen corazon , carinoso, why comprensivo. es la verdad que todas cosas estan en tus manos, pero si es possible ayudarle yo estare tan agradecido. Amen